The Gbody Poem (what do you think?)

by **454muscle** on Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:12 am

I wrote this for my GP. However, thought others might like it (or not) but whatever, figured I'd submit it here and call it "The Gbody Poem":

A click, a chirp, to her disarm:
one turn, two, and three's the charm.
Deafening was her gasping wake,
fire breathing, snorting, quake.

Indignant, sore, irate her tone,
she begged the pavement to dethrone.
A feather touch is all it took
the tires smoked, they cooked, then hooked.

One chirp -- purr, at two, we flee,
the sky was all the view to see.
Standing tall, she pulls a G,
Smoking import's sea to sea.

Gearing down, I over take
Destroyed was what stood in her wake.
And if you blinked you missed the plight
of them that couldn't put a fight.

Wait yet here, smokescreen's clear,
Senslessly in second gear:
The euros, japs, germans, rice,
Paid the price, not once but twice.

For though you breathed in gobs of smoke,
Yet shamelessly came back to choke.
Faster than the speed of light
She's gone alright, she's out of sight.

Written and copyright © 454muscle June 30, 2011.

by **That 4 door guy** on Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:19 am

by **That 4 door guy** on Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:20 am

please email this to me. that_4_door_guy@yahoo.com if you dont mind i would like to put this on my facebook.

by **454muscle** on Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:25 am

Thanks, and feel free bro, to copy and paste it from here.

by **beenen** on Thu Jun 30, 2011 12:30 am

a tear to my eye...

but seriously, it was really good lol

by **454muscle** on Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:31 pm

Guess most old timers on this forum don't like poetry eh.

Lol
That 4 door guy, did anyone like it on your FB?

by **MrHernandez** on Tue Jul 12, 2011 8:46 pm

Shakespeare-esque.......seriously though i like it

by **supkylesup** on Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:03 pm

That was fucking awsome.
Pure brilliance.
but who would expect any less from 454muscle.

by **Blazenlotus** on Tue Jul 12, 2011 9:11 pm

That was awesome man.

by **gk666** on Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:14 pm

wow... fucking ridiculous... when i saw the thread i was expecting a rap song to be truthful but you could actually probably sell that shit

by **454muscle** on Wed Jul 13, 2011 9:34 am

awwwwe thanks... you guy's are all awesome

by **JBreu** on Wed Jul 13, 2011 9:46 am

I must say, that was very well written and I'm a fan!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hell, 454 Muscle for Prez :lol:

by **That 4 door guy** on Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:34 pm

454muscle wrote:Guess most old timers on this forum don't like poetry eh. Lol
That 4 door guy, did anyone like it on your FB?

lol i just saw this. nobody "liked" it on there, but i was asked about it alot. they thought it was something i haad written. i gladly denied the assumption and said it was a fellow gbody goer...

by **Grandprixpaul** on Sat Feb 25, 2012 11:29 am

That was sick, think i might make a copy of it and hang it in my garage. Great job.

by **454muscle** on Sat Feb 25, 2012 12:29 pm

Hehe... thanks

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